October Girl

I really liked this, I don't exactly know what to say. :D good job. Keep at it?

I really liked this Linds. I loved the ending it was sensitive and sweet. Something every girl wishes would happen to her. I liked it, and no I didn't find ...

Thanks. :D I guess.

I really liked this poem. It flowed together really well. Well done, I hope to read more of your work. Hope this helps. -Max

I really liked this.... but I think you could have expanded this a little more. (But then again that's just me.) I liked this alot!!!! Hope this helps. -Max

So should I leave this here, or move to lyrics?

FINALLY!!!! Someone who doesn't say it's emo..... because it's not! Thank you!

Funny, I thought (other than spelling.) Creative and new.... good job.

Court, I think Hunter is right about the character. What does he/she look lie? I think you could add just a couple more sentences.... maybe if you'd like. Hope this ...

whoops! Sorry. My bad :lol:

I agree with X, was there a war going on? Where is the character? What's the emotion? Is the character is pain? What's going on? I think you should expand ...

Wow..... i'm impressed, I like it..... alot. I'm actually stunned. And trust me I don't become stunned easily. I think it flows well. Very nice. Are you new to the ...

I like it, but as EX said you need to expand it. I think it's fairly creative. We're all just trying to help. The girl who can't sleep -Insomniac

Hi Eli, I think the others are right. It doesn't belong here, in the welcome section. I don't mean to grill you about it... but your spelling..... eek!!! I love ...

I liked it too.... but really what was it about? Clones? -Max